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July 9, 2020

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IELTS  Academic Writing Task 1 and 2 (D53)

You should not take more than 60 minutes on both tasks. You can input your answers in the form at the end.

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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs below show the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

» You should write at least 150 words.

 

Sample Answer

The line graph details the total number of tourists, as well as where they stayed, going to a given Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, total tourists rose considerably, and those staying on cruise ships increased in particularovertaking staying on the island itself, which underwent a more moderate increase.

Visitors residing on the island during their travels began the period at about .75 million, about 500,000 above those on cruise ships. From there, the numbers for the former climbed quickly to 1.5 million by 2013, a full million higher than the latter at the same time. Then those on the island were relatively steady until the end of the time surveyed, while cruise ship passengers rose steadily, surpassing the former figure midway through 2015 and reaching a peak in 2017 of 2 million.

The progressive patterns for visitors on cruise ships and the island were reflected in substantial gains for overall visitors, which started at 1 million in 2010, grew consistently to 2.7 million in 2015 before plateauing through 2016 and then increasing sharply to 3.5 million by the end of the period.

 

Vocabulary

details illustrates

as well as and

given Caribbean island some island in the Caribbean such as Jamaica or Haiti

rose considerably increased a lot

staying on cruise ships remaining on luxury liner cruises

in particular especially

overtaking surpassing

underwent a more moderate increase experienced a smaller rise

residing living on

during their travels when they were travelling

former climbed quickly mentioned before area rose fast

higher than above

the latter the last mentioned one

at the same time in the same period of time

relatively steady generally level

end of the time surveyed by the end of the period

passengers people on cruise ships

surpassing overtaking

former figure number mentioned first

midway through halfway in

reaching a peak hit a high point

progressive patterns increasing trend

reflected mirrored, replicated

substantial gains big increases

grew consistently increased a lot

plateauing levelling off

increasing sharply rising a lot

IELTS Academic Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.

Why might this be the case?

Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

» You should write at least 250 words.

Structure of essay- Plan it in this manner mentioned below:


Introduction:

  1. Paraphrase the topic for the essay.
  2. State your opinion clearly.

BP1:

  1. Write a clear topic sentence with your main idea at the end.
  2. Begin to develop your main idea.
  3. Continue developing the same idea with supporting ideas.
  4. Be as specific as possible.
  5. Conclude the paragraph

BP2:

  1. Write another topic sentence with a new main idea.
  2. Explain your main idea or begin developing it.
  3. Make sure that your ideas flow neatly together.
  4. Give an example if possible. Here I use a hypothetical example.
  5. Explain your example.
  6. Conclude with a strong statement explaining the full results.

Conclusion:

  1. Summarise your main ideas and repeat your opinion.
  2. Add a final thought/extra detail for full marks from the examiner.

 

Sample Answer:

Many people today value owning their own home over renting. In my opinion, this is part of a natural human desire for security and prestige but it contains risks.

The source of this desire is a need for stability and respect. An individual who does not own their own home must pay rent to a landlord. This hangs over them and necessitates maintaining a job with a steady salary and balancing rent against other living expenses. Once a person owns their own home, they are then able to spend their money more freely and consider different employment without the fear of becoming homeless. Moreover, having a home lends an air of respectability. Only the wealthy are able buy a house and most homeowners take pride in the size and condition of their home as a sign of their social standing.

Nonetheless, home ownership is a negative trend as it forces unrealistic expectations on millions. Most people live in city apartments with rents and are not capable of buying a house. The pressure to buy one is likely to engender feelings of inadequacy and resentment towards the upper classes. This famously fueled the sub-prime mortgage scandals of the early 2000s in the United States when millions borrowed more than they could afford to buy homes, then defaulted on their payments and lost a lifetime of investment. Had these same people opted to rent, they would have saved more money and could have invested in other forms of capital such as the stock market.

In conclusion/To sum up, owning a home is innately desirable but in the end causes more harm than good due to the pressure it places on individuals. Many people have learned this lesson and home ownership may begin to decline in the future.